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Early Morning Ouse by =crowthius:iconcrowthius:

Categories Photography > Animals, Plants & Nature > Waterscapes

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First light creeps up on the buildings on the west bank at York.

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=GhostInKernel32 Apr 7, 2009, 1:06:58 AM
This image has some very strong points in it's favor. 1) Good composition. The lines of the water's edge coupled with the lines on the bridge are very flattering and draw the viewer into the image. 2) Great tones. Nothing over exposed nor underexposed. I really like how you chose to keep the post processing to a minimum. Often times you'll see dodge and burn done in excess. 3) Good depth of field and focus

The only thing that personally would make this image better in my opinion is a slight crop on the right hand side of the image. Probably right up to the lightpost, cut out most of the walkway. In doing so you would also focal point of the image to the right thus enhancing the rule of thirds.
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*taffmeister Apr 7, 2009, 1:03:25 AM
Another nice composition Steve! The quality of the light was fantstic! We'll have to do it again sometime, Stenigot perhaps.

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~thedotspace Apr 7, 2009, 2:00:34 AM
Very pleasant shot! :)

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Mood: Joy ~benedictr Apr 7, 2009, 2:42:57 AM
Nice photo! The perstective makes the Building look majestic :P

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~Csipesz Apr 7, 2009, 3:22:29 AM
Awesome lights and nice shot !

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=jonnygoodboy Apr 7, 2009, 6:24:35 AM
The early rising warming light is perfect here Steve and love the framing too :camera:

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=crowthius Apr 8, 2009, 12:48:10 AM
Stenigot it is.

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=crowthius Apr 8, 2009, 12:09:59 PM
Thank you Bhuvan. If ever the chance arises to visit York I would recomend that you take it and don't forget your camera :)

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=crowthius Apr 8, 2009, 12:11:01 PM
It looks here like a very important building, but I suspect that it is not.

Thanks Benny :)

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=crowthius Apr 8, 2009, 12:11:23 PM
Thank you very much ;)

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April 7
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Canon
Canon EOS 40D
1/15 second
F/22.0
11 mm
100
Apr 5, 2009, 7:00:47 AM

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